Raj_Shah_7152
Oh this plotline is an absolute nightmare for Drach and such fun to read. Rudra is younger and naive, so we have watched that growth and development do away with some of that naivety. His meeting with Grey further solidified his naive abilities and brought to light his need to mature and change his thinking. This plotline is certainly interesting and I’m eagerly awaiting the climax of this arc.
I like where it’s going and i especially like that he’s solving this one with schemes not just violance. Some people are saying it’s rushed but i feel like you have a bigger over all plotlibe going on with the cultivation stuff and whatever Cuber corporation are hiding. So i feel like this pace is hood so we don’t overly drag everything on. Otherwise thanks for the great work!
I love it but at points the grammar and spelling errors really are out of hand you would have so much more people if they were fully fixed I am sure of it. It's just a matter of finding someone wanting to help go through page 1 to all 500+ and fix them completely. But finding someone trustworthy is the issue I can see
I enjoy the successful scheming by the MC and interesting plot developments. My biggest gripe about the MC is that he doesn't act like someone who has lived almost an extra decade of life. More often than not, he seems to live like a frat boy when he isn't dominating in game. I hope to see a more mature leader in the near future.