Raj_Shah_7152
Let's be honest here. This looks like RSSG. The author copied the idea of selling info. Anyway it's much fast paced than RSSG. I think you need slow down a bit. Nonetheless it's still entertaining.
One more flaw, the weaposn that are dropped are TOO high level specially this early in the game. It should've had limitation, like "You can only equip this item after reaching level 50" and "You need to this minimum stat points to properly equip this item Strength: 75, Vitality ;50" it gives tension and importance to the stat points instead of being just there as a feature or design.
Raj_Shah_7152:Copy is a heavy word, i genuinely write my story on my own and daily at that , also its been over 2 years since iv read RSSG , i do admit that i have been inspired a lot by that book , however copy isnt something i will ever do , i do appreciate your suggestion about slowing it down though , i really need to better plan my story progression.
I'm sorry but has he not heard anything about extremely altering the timeline by him getting a title that took someone else 3 years that messed many things up for sure. And a detailed map which probably wouldn't have come out for another month. And completing that mission in 2-3 months instead of 4 would have been better than a couple days.