just saying... it's just that there's a lot of people who deserve second chances but was never given the opportunity I just can't symphatize with the MC. but your work is good no doubt about it.

Well this is disturbing. he killed his own father who never wronged him. he doesn't deserve redemption. in life, there's no second chances. those who believe in second chances are either destined for mediocrity or simply delusional.

The author is really destroying his novel same with EGM with an illogical plot hole and plot armor he destroyed it. The title should be changed to dumb and dumber. two idiot siblings against the world. Why don't you make him absorb his sisters menstruation too if you're not satisfied enough then let him go to a blood bank then make him the history's 1st blood heist. Retard.

this is dumb. the MC became a dumb simp. his blood power has been nerfed big time which is very much the author tends to do like in his EGM where he made an illogical plot hole everywhere. stupid. come on man! he fight on equal footing with those spacewarriors which is much much stronger than this orc champion mob. you made the MC STUPID. tch such a letdown.

THERE IT IS!!! the legendary 'FATTY' sidekick of the MC! hahaha

so where are his attributes? Hays

Naivety and idiocy is different. the MC is an idiot no a retard. for his age and what he experienced by far he should at least be aware of human nature. not to mention the author introduce him more matured than his age. I don't like the MC so far but I'll continue reading.

What a bad chapter. it's redundant to say the least. this reminds me that having an eidetic memory and being smart are two different things. the mc's a letdown so far and his personality is rapidly going down the wrong path and too fast at that.

OK so this is an Indian made novel. I hope it doesn't turn out like a Chinese one. I dislike Chinese supremacist novels so I hope it doesn't turned to be one.

it's boring. there's not a lot of MC exposure yet but the story is already switching pov to supporting characters. at least try to build up the MC first before switching pov. this is a legend of legends copy cat alright. I can tell the MC is gonna be a fascist hero type shouldering the fate of the universe. hays

is the author Filipino? guardian of calamatis gate. Calamansi + Kamatis = Calamatis. LOL

This chapter revolves in him describing the hallway. I'm a bit triggered when I read 'he chose to descend downstairs'. I mean can he descend upstairs? It's common logic that needs to be omitted. Too much emphasis on unnecessary things.

I cringe and cringe and cringe the whole time I was reading this. Primordial this primordial that. I mean what is a primordial? It's a nonsensical term to the time after the creation. And his Jian nickname is redundant. Really it's redundant you should change it to Qin tian coz it leaves a bad taste.

Is Luke boy or girl? Coz you used he then she, his then her. Luke's prolly gay so u should put LGBT to genre.

How is he the world's unluckiest person? How about those crippled? Beggars? Orphans? It's an overstatement to say that he's much unlucky than those less fortunate souls. Correct me if I'm wrong, druid isn't a race, it's a profession like a judge or a guardian of nature. Dryad on the other hand is a race. You must confuse about the two being the same thing but they're not.

He's a Weeb. This is his playground while he could choose to be practical and yet chose complicated stuff. Anybody who's an Otaku knows that Qi is greater than mana. It can strengthen you all around at the same time manifest much stronger attack than mana. Can a tier 8 fight against a peerless cultivator? The answer is no. His choice of name is ridiculous given that he just started the game. I don't like being low key but his actions is pretty much saying 'I'm the best if your not happy kill me'. Too high profile for a lazy loser.

Nah changed my mind ill give it another go. It's much better than those Chinese novels.

Nah changed my mind ill give it another go. It's much better than those Chinese novels.

Sorry I'm dropping it now. It's just the mc's gone retard. I mean he's supposed to be 30plus but his mentality is of a child. The author is trying to show that he's quirky and dumb at the same time. He just created a mess with his idiocy and now even his family is in danger. What a loser. Second chance is wasted on a loser like him. Trash is trash. a person can't change his skin and a leopard can't change his spots. No character development for this one more like degeneration. Tch. Being knowledgeable doesn't mean your smart. He's got knowledge but not the smarts.. It started good but now mc's a joke.

This is getting ridiculous. The game has been running for 4 weeks?! Seriously?! If I'm not mistaken it hasn't been even a week and if it's 4 weeks his level is not in line with the time frame. You screwed the details with regards to time frame.