Raj_Shah_7152
Let's be honest here. This looks like RSSG. The author copied the idea of selling info. Anyway it's much fast paced than RSSG. I think you need slow down a bit. Nonetheless it's still entertaining.
I'm an amature writer just like you and even made the same mistake as you but; Yes, slow down a bit. Take more time to flesh out the rules of your world, I also recommend drawwing a map (It doesn't need to be great) so you can better understand the locations. Like, if Blackwater is in the eastern continent, you may forget this detail a hundred chapters from now so its better to have a pre-drawn map.
Raj_Shah_7152:Copy is a heavy word, i genuinely write my story on my own and daily at that , also its been over 2 years since iv read RSSG , i do admit that i have been inspired a lot by that book , however copy isnt something i will ever do , i do appreciate your suggestion about slowing it down though , i really need to better plan my story progression.
I'm sorry but has he not heard anything about extremely altering the timeline by him getting a title that took someone else 3 years that messed many things up for sure. And a detailed map which probably wouldn't have come out for another month. And completing that mission in 2-3 months instead of 4 would have been better than a couple days.