Andry_Reyes
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Thanks dudeđ
I liked it. The pacing is good and there aren't any major grammar mistakes. I am still reading. Added it to my collection.
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I agree with Arttibartfast. Your pacing is good with a very low number of mistakes, but it's a little wordy and his envy could be described in a more concise manner. But the novel itself is one you'll cling onto so great job .
why do I suddenly have the urge to draw him and the girl >:3 this scene be too real in my mind
Woahhhhh!!! This chapter is so good! And the creators thought, everyone can relate to!!! Loved it![img=coins]
Nice it going! Packed with emotions!
Great chapter! I've become a fan!
love how it is well-written. and the last part really saddened me.
Many scenarios of Miles in this chapter reminds me of myself. And also the ending is hella painful
This is good â¤â¤.