mere_eiffel
--A mushroom writer-- English is not my native language so please bear with me.
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mere_eiffel2yrPostedEvery chapter of the story will definitely hook you up to read until the end. Characters are greatly written with their own personalities and I'm excited and is looking forward what kind of plot the story has. The story is wonderfully written, the vocabulary, grammar, and dialogues I love how the author writes it. Highly recommend love this <3
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I was hooked all throught out the chapter, I wish I'd be able to write this way
This book has been deleted. - mere_eiffel2yrPosted
Definitely not the usual book I've always reviewed in the past, but wow. The words are nothing too difficult or fancy so readers won't be so confused, but the way it was constructed was beautifully written, throwing twist and turns here and there, and in my perspective, I also didn't notice any errors in grammars or punctuations. It also highlighted actual life situations that people and the world actually experience. I wish I could express more what I am feeling towards this book right now, but I'm at a loss for words. Thank you author for writing this.
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I got confused with who sara was, but I embrace this mindset
"Stop thinking with that thing in your chest Sara" actually means 'don't let your emotions get the best of you'. - mere_eiffel2yrCommented
I love this
A spiritual relationship between the Creator and the creation is the healthiest of them all. The truth and art of life lay within the knowledge of acknowledging the beauty of this structured universe. - mere_eiffel2yrCommented
See the whole picture
"My point is, Every story has two sides, you either choose one side from the other like the rest or see both sides, explore the grey area". - mere_eiffel2yrCommented
It's either all or nothing :))
"Nonsense, that is not only foolish and ignorant, it is also delusional. How can one accept part of the world and intend to leave the rest? To whom for that matter? Who is supposed to carry the remaining for him? Or is 'he' of a different gender? You cannot choose to see the light without acknowledging the darkness. There is no such thing as 'good or bad it is good and bad. They come as a package deal. You cannot take one and decide to leave the other, it is more like saying you want to love but fear getting hurt. - mere_eiffel2yrCommented
Oo, naranasan ko na at nararanasan ko pa din.
Have you ever been empty of tears? Have you cried but your voice be on mute? Have the thought of rope hanging or knife poking or pill overdosing or poison swallowing or better pistol triggered been an easy escape from that moment they call "weakness" or seemed like the best solution or the best suitable alternative of peace? Have you ever fallen so deep that space seemed measurable? Have ye ever suffocated by oxygen, same oxygen you breathe in, same air you live with? No? Yes? - mere_eiffel2yrCommented
Wow, I don't know what is it exactly but this struck me and gave me goosebumps
Unfortunately, I did not choose any of the above. That is why you are choosing left, right, forward, and when you are unsure you return to re-read these words. You see, I believe I am well and alive somewhere, at exactly 13:00 I chose differently in another time zone. One chose left, the other went right, and surprisingly I'd have chosen forward or remained asleep until the alarm sang. The catch is we might not have met then, strangers going on with their own lives. And sadly you might have been the one drafting these words with a gulp of liquor, a sore heart, and a determination to rest. Don't beat yourself up all the outcomes led here, if I were to live elsewhere I'd have to... Sometimes what you need is a break from yourself. And I have chosen to leave and you have to choose to Live. - mere_eiffel2yrPosted
The story was very well written and the flow of the plot even if its still in the first few chapters, they were already interesting. I would really look forward if this story were to be made a tv series or a movie. There were littlo to no flaws in use of words and nothing is too major that could turn off the hype of the readers while reading. This was a wonderful story great job author!
- mere_eiffel2yrReplied to Raksha1
Or the author just wanted to be dramtic XD
Snapping out of whatever daze I was in, I made sure that I locked the car before dashing across the park to one of the small sheds they provided for visitors. Wild flowers, bushes, and sharp branches grazed my legs as I ran across the field, the rain finally pouring out. - mere_eiffel2yrReplied to Omahakhan
- mere_eiffel2yrPosted
Yup another amazing book. I was confused at the first chapter on what in the world was going on but because I liked bikes I kept going XD. Anyways it was amazing how you immediately able to apply a thrill that would piqued a reader's interest at the second chapter only. I love the characters too they're a problematic duo I could feel it and I'm declaring it. Really good book! Highly recommend! Great job author.
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Imagine taking this literally and figuratively which one would be more offensive XD
"You are a snake." - mere_eiffel2yrCommented
you're in trouble young man XD
Alekai swore under his breath. Her idea of fun was being chased by fireballs from the sky.