Comments of chapter undefined of The Golden Throne

interesting however if he doesnt want a repeat of his last life then making sure he's the strongest is the best method and I look forward to him creating alot of tech

This novel's too abrupt for me. Nothing transitions smoothly, and pace is rushed. I'm out!

It lacks the scenarios and the transition he makes from one place to another. The changes are very rude, as in this chapter, where one moment he is on the market and then suddenly appears in his room. This would improve the quality of the text and solve the problem of chapters being short.

its like the beginning after the end

need better editing. current one is not bad but lots of easy mistakes

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

I don't like him to train swordmanship. I like swords but it's time to get bored because of it.

Good story. Chapters are super short though.

gracias por el cap