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Comments of chapter undefined of The Ocean Dragon's Bride

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lingspiration
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I like that you showed the repetition of events instead of just saying that the same outcomes keep happening. I think the only thing that I didn't like is the main character's "woe is me" thinking/attitude. If she's been through so much and gotten as far as she has, then I think she'd be stronger and maybe more resilient. But overall, great chapter. And I love that we get a glimpse of the dragon too!

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Soun_Phavin
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The writing 10/10 The plot oh my god 100000000/10 I really love the story like this

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Soun_Phavin
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Love it

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Soun_Phavin
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This is so good