Comments of chapter undefined of Amon, The Legendary Overlord
Amon, The Legendary Overlord
Lruska
Chapter comments26
This was a solid chapter with a good bit of underlying depth to it that you really have to search through and think about. This chapter touches a few different emotions and reveals a touch of character development in one of the sisters. On top of that I'd like to point out that those who apparently take everything they read at face value and don't really think about what there reading/kinda just float along. His mother didn't necessarily want to kick him out or get rid of him. The fact was the parent was unequipped to raise him, the grandparents stepping in and from the faked death and message to the grandson in regards to his genes ect, clearly had an extensive knowledge surrounding what our main character is going through. Showcasing why they stepped in to raise the child, the mother who didn't understand or had no idea how to raise her child given his unique circumstances surrounding his unique genetics and how they effected him upon reaching age 5. I could go into more depth here but I won't. The chapter made complete sense all the way through and touched on multiple topics that some readers, that unfortunately, made baseless negative comments missed, cause they clearly just didn't catch them. Aka which as a result the chapter basically went straight over there head. So far author the character is being flushed out splendidly, and as should be we are slowly learning more about him and if paying attention can draw some fairly obvious conclusions. Ex, this kid has had to learn to suppress his emotions since the age of 5 years old since due to his superhuman genetic code. Which has caused him to be isolated by others, himself and grandparents for his and others own good. Due to this he severely lack appropriate social skills and normal life experiences for a "normal" young adult at his age normally would have to some degree. There's a whole slew of things more then what I've typed that you can take away from this chapter and others before it. Good work
