Comments of chapter undefined of Rebirth Of The Strongest Celestial

I don't understand a thing here. The pacing is everywhere and somehow author just throws things at you expecting you to already know them. Also descriptions are kinda weird "Bushy tailed" for example makes me believe his sister is a rabbit or something with a tail. There is no coherence here to my linking.

Dropped doesnt make sense

what interesting plot of the story, but some info was unclear or unnecessary then we know that author dont have plan yet, so will see upcoming chapter

Why is there so many random periods? The periods sometimes appear in the middle of a sentence or they are not where they need to be. Also it is kinda confusing. I feel as though there are a lot of things left out. This seems more like a rough draft of a story than an actural story

pretty much...yeah I can give the extended intro with his birthday but it reads worse than getting a colonoscopy