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Comments of chapter undefined of Lightning and Fire Given Form(REPOSTED)

Spankdady
SpankdadyLv3Spankdady

Don’t end the MC story in Dxd

Krayner28
Krayner28Lv2Krayner28

BlackSwordman1234:So you want the multiverse one?
Drakon_dovakhin
Drakon_dovakhinLv14Drakon_dovakhin

Do the multiverse versione.He can go to nasuverse to fight angra mainyu.

Colorblindd
ColorblinddLv14Colorblindd

I always liked instead of world jumping world expansion. For example X event happens causing the world lvl to increase forcing a change to the world and bringing in new hosts of characters with it due to the worlds expansion encomposing other dimensions now that its strong enough to hold them. I always feel the story can flow and be built on better when you get to stay in a world where youve already fleshed things out instead of jumping from place to place and having to flesh out multiple worlds youll leave anyway. Thanks for the great work so far by the way and ill keep readin no mater what you do :)

Daoist9xUOKW
Daoist9xUOKWLv1Daoist9xUOKW

I think it depends on how strong you make MC at the end of the story, or it would be like a too strong rimuru who can go to any world and fix the problem in a matter of minutes

Shurasik
ShurasikLv5Shurasik

Thanks for the chapter

Spankdady
SpankdadyLv3Spankdady

Honestly I thought about the Multi-verse but no it will ruin the story so basically just stick with DXD and do side story on his children

MrMike
MrMikeLv5MrMike

Thanks for the great chapter, keep up the good work! For when you finish the ExE part of DxD why not both the multiverse stuff and a fanfic for his kids(of coarse if it's not too much for you)

Afsoares
AfsoaresLv14Afsoares

thanks for the chapter he can ho to the multiverse or create a world within him for all of them and get acess to the multiverse or something like the fanton zone in dc but for his loved one and like that

Fantastic_Spirit
Fantastic_SpiritLv14Fantastic_Spirit

Nice.

Damian0481
Damian0481Lv13Damian0481

if you go with multiverse just dont add more girls...

Reinhard_t
Reinhard_tLv11Reinhard_t

If its a multiversal Travel i just hope its he wont reveak it

Trouxa_157
Trouxa_157Lv3Trouxa_157

😅 poh man eu gostaria de ver os filhos dele tbm

Kami12
Kami12Lv6Kami12

Multiverse

Kami12
Kami12Lv6Kami12

ThanksThanksThanksThanks

Majeh7
Majeh7Lv5Majeh7

I say just finish this novel by beating the boss and making another novel with his kids in the multiverse.

DaoistPvThTV
DaoistPvThTVLv4DaoistPvThTV

Do the multiverse version

Daoist049954
Daoist049954Lv1Daoist049954

As the strongest servant of fgo.

VEGETA_15505
VEGETA_15505Lv4VEGETA_15505

do multiverse

Dark_lord_shadow
Dark_lord_shadowLv5Dark_lord_shadow

Thanks for the chapter. :)

Dical
DicalLv11Dical

Thanks for the chapter