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DaoistDdadwI
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Such a young boy and so wise beyond his years! I feel sorry for William.

DMMarz
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I loved this chapter. Look at Rayven trying to bond with williamšŸ˜. i think william needed to hear and see the difference in Rayven for his sister. He wont be happy if she isnt treated well. William will be a force to recon with when he gets older. Such an amazing boy. šŸ’«šŸ’™

Sa_tine
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I forgot to add that I am looking forward to the conversation between Angel and Skender. I think weā€™re going to learn things

Carolyn_V_Singer
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William is very protective of his sister and him telling Rayven to take care of her was showing him to be careful and not to hurt Angelica. I liked the way William told Angelica to give Rayven a hard time I had to smile. Angelica will come around and bond with Rayven in time.

manakiolsen
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William is amazing, I love how he was Telling Rayven all the things he needs at the end, like he is in charge and coming up with the master plan. Canā€™t wait for the next chapter for us to see Skender and Angelicaā€™s conversations. Hopefully some of our questions will be answered. Also, look at Rayven being the man, so happy he is making the changes but i like him brooding as well. But imagine the change that will happen for him after Angelica actually admits to him her feelings for him not just that she cares for him. His resolution with change dramatically I think, knowing he needs to protect the women who loves him.

chinawa
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Lucky Angelica to have a wise,protective and best brother in WilliamšŸ˜ā¤ļøšŸ„° It's funny how Will analyzed Rayven's actions - it's like he's doing it the readers behalfšŸ˜‚The questions and advices are so on point.Gotta love him!!! I think Will felt Rayven's sincerity. To Rayven, if you're sincere, Angelica will feel it, she'd rely on you and will learn to trust in youšŸ’• thanks for the chap!šŸ˜Š Fave part: When Rayven admits to Will, he likes AngelicašŸ„°

oirCheerio6
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Love wise sassy William! Wanting to protect his sister and let her vent out and then becoming tough brother in lawšŸ˜‚

K_Deck
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Iā€™m so glad William and Angelica got some time together. And Rayvenā€™s changes are amazing; so glad William could see the drastic change in just a few days. I still find it amazing itā€™s only been a few days in the story but feels like weeks for me!

Elena_650
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Trust is built on a day-to-day basis over a sustained period of time, I said at the end of last chapter. Williamā€™s ā€œinheritedā€ knowledge and wisdom concurs with mine. Rayven and Angelica need to spend time together and give each other time. Time to heal, to be comfortable around each other, to let their feelings come forward, to build trust. As urgent as the mating bond and the mark might be for her safety, I also said, she needs time. And I totally agree with her. For instance, talking about sci-fi romance, Iā€™m not too big on the whole werewolvesā€™ concept of fated mates because in my eyes, it renders the personal bond unreal, and I think that that is the most important part. Whatever else there might be, as much as I may welcome it is extra. Rayven and Angelica need to be two people who love each other for themselves before they come to that. Moreover, they wonā€™t be able to get there otherwise and the mating bond itself wouldnā€™t work if not like thatā€¦ William really cracked me up. I love him so much. He gave him some serious X-rays in there, rudeness, bluntness and childishness, add selfishness and we got the whole pack. And he offered some good advice. He should be patient and she, as her own husband told her earlier, should express her feelings and worries and should feel free to reciprocate to that. I relished on nervous Lord Rayven seeking advice and approval, stating his newfound good intentions, accepting he was wrong. William canā€™t believe the man and says, no wonder his sister looks like a ghost. But it is so much more (and crazy me I wrote about it a whole different post). ā€œPlease take care of herā€. I had waiting for this, but the time hadnā€™t come. As smart, wise, determined and dedicated as he is he knows he needs to get a hold of all the information possible. He cares so much for his sister and now that his ability gives him the possibility of actually helping her, heā€™s on full protector mode. Canā€™t wait for him to meet Lucrezia and for Skenderā€™s and Angelicaā€™s conversation that has finally come. Oh, Iā€™m so excited! I canā€™t wait for more šŸ˜€šŸ‘šŸ˜€šŸ‘šŸ’•šŸ’•šŸ’•

Jessica_Zagorski
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Youā€™re spoiling me with these daily updates! Loved this chapter Iā€™m Glad William is seeing the changes in Rayven and Iā€™m Glad angelica is smart enough to stay on guard with Rayven though Iā€™m Sure he will find ways to break down her walls and earn her trust

Needmorecoffee
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OMG!!!! William is precious šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜. If he is like this now, treating his sister so well can you imagine how he would with the woman he loves in the futurešŸ„°ā¤. Can't wait to see that. And God he made me laugh so much šŸ¤£šŸ¤£šŸ¤£

Elena_650
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William knows his sister and he has seen a lot, but he also doesnā€™t truly know what she has been through ever since she arrived. I hope the shock of seeing Rayvenā€™s smile, and new self would have been only the one she got but it is not, thereā€™s plenty more. First, she thought he was repulsed, then she found out he was not. A whole wave of desire shook her that longed for kisses and more. His confession was a tsunami stirring unknown emotions that gave her back her sense of innocence while wanting to be innocent no more. Then came the pain and the hurt. A broken man. A man who felt unworthy of happiness and of her. Further confessions began. And how painful they were, a long sleepless night. His life and hers on the rim of the balcony at dawn. Words of feelings yet unknown made their way to her mouth. When the stakes are life and death, truth finds its way out. Rivers were poured, a heart was found. An 180Āŗ turn, a breaking point it was. Intimacy found its way in the form of a shared bed and a bath. A bed was shared again and from it rose a romantic man, a man so unexpected and surprising that he shone almost too bright, a man who wanted to be a husband for his wife. A man who finally found the truth to a question he never cared or dared to ask. A man that still held however many doubts regarding himself, his dark thoughts, his desire to die. But a man who knew that no matter how much it frightened him, she needed to know about who and what he was. Constantine came and so revelations began. Her nightmares came forward as well as what he was. A memory of abuse at the hands of shades crept its way in, her unconscious mind brought a dream about fangs, and all in all was just too much. Now there is a whole new dimension to reality, to her husband, to herself. There are other creatures and enemies out there who are a danger to her brother and to her. Add this newfound fear to the also recently found one of losing her self-harming and prone to suicide 1000-year-old with a very dark past husband and you get a ghost looking sister and wife. Sheā€™s been on emotional overdrive since her father died. I have made my calculations correctly, this night is the 6th night after the wedding, and itā€™s been a fortnight since she arrived. It is no wonder that she isnā€™t well, more than the food that sheā€™s skipped for some days, it is her emotional condition that has taken a toll on her. No body, no matter how healthy can take that incredible amount of stress. She really does need to rest and Rayven has to take charge of things and take care of her.

hollandh_2001
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Jasmine, I understand the updates are time consuming and difficult at times but thank you so much for writing daily. I love this book and look forward every day to a new chapter.

FormerPD2020
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William telling Rayven he had just told his sister to give him a hard time šŸ¤£ Absolutely love it! Baby steps in these relationships.

Tararizer_01
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Angel and Will talking out with each other is just what was needed. Will always has great advice. I wonder what he is searching for in his home? Hopefully Rayven and Skender don't run into trouble. šŸ˜¬ I too want to know more about these shades. Will Lucrezia answer all of Will's question if she meets him? I can't wait for that conversation to come up. šŸ˜‰ Thanks for the chapter Jazzy!

Tina_Roberts_1551
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I glad William Came to see His sister It help her some and to see that Raven is changing for the good

Tina_Roberts_1551
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I think there something AT there old house that will help them But will and Angelina Bothe need to stay away from the house thay could have some one watch The house

MichelleDalton8310
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Jas so many questions Such a long time till the next chapter ā£ļøā£ļøšŸ˜³ so glad they are starting to get to know each other and get along together ā£ļøthey will be hard tO defeat in the future ā£ļøā¤ļøā€šŸ”„ i love your writing jas alwYs have you never disappoint ā£ļøeven if we have to wait ā£ļøšŸ’•

cking14
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William is arming himself with knowledge. The more you know of your enemy the better you can defeat them. With each chapter, I love it a little more. ā¤ļø

Sa_tine
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Such a clever boy this William. Loved the chapter! Thank you

Tina_Roberts_1551
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It good to see them all Bonding together As a family