Comments of chapter undefined of Heart of Darkness

Man Rayven I know you want to make her hate you and be scared but come on you could have told her in a better way or found a better time. She needed you that night to comfort her not ruin her night by dropping a vague past bomb on her like that. Seriously he is one character I love but at the same time I want to smack some sense into him.

She must be so conflicted because she sees him as someone who saved her and is caring toward her and her brother. He shows her kindness and to know what he did to his sister must be heartbreaking. It will be difficult to see beyond his past actions and continue to care for him. Hopefully she can do it. 🖤

What do we need to offer to get more chapters?!?! What will it take? I need MOOORE!! This stop and go is killing me 😭

Poor Angelica 😥. She doesn’t know whether to believe what she sees or what he told her. She has a hard time connecting his past actions to the person that he is now.

Oh wow: my brain is literally shutting down right now. I’m not sure what I expected of him telling her about his past, but this was not it. How will she get past this to accept that he has changed? Has he changed?

Well... at least he went into her room instead of hiding in his own. It's ugly. But it's progress. Too bad he ran off like a child.

I think Rayven could have said that differently .als why not tell her everything and let her know he was Demos but he wasn't that man anymore .also that he was a demon but not all demons are especially bad. that he is so sorry for what he did.

so many thoughts with this chapter and also a bunch of random ones 1. Rayven and Angelica make me think of Damon and Elena from Vampire Diaries. 2. Within Temptation - All I Need sounds like a great soundtrack for this story 3. I know we are all anxious for them to make love but boy, am I happy they haven't!! She would feel raped right now...I'll be surprised if she doesn't feel disgusted by their kiss for a while. This is a man she doesn't know and who didn't deem it necessary until now to tell her who and what he is. And man, isn't he a lot more than she signed up for?! So, I'm happy they haven't slept together and also that he has also been very reserved and cautious about this matter. 4. I'm glad Zarus warned him about her reaction. It is expected and justified for her to be frightened, disappointed, mad, and maybe even reject him for a while. 5. Angelica, please don't leave the castle now....you'll be in danger. Or maybe this is his chance to save her and score some points with her. 6. Totally random but I kinda fantasize about him teaching her to fight and to use a sword. 7. I am so excited to read what's coming next and Thursday feels like a month away.... I hope at some point she tells him in detail about her dreams.

Thats a lot of emotions in such a short amount of time!

Well… empathy is indeed NOT his strength. He actually just told her how he exactly feels about that… I feel kinda sad for him because he never really learned what empathy means but he still can and I think he will. He didn‘t mean to scare her, he just didn‘t know how to tell her something like that in a better way and honestly, how do you want to tell something like this in a better way… It actually doesn‘t matter how you tell that, the result will stay the same.

Oh boy! What an intense and heart breaking chapter! First Angelica has that dream and then Rayven tells her about what he did to his sister. Yikes! Poor Angelica! I also feel bad for Rayven right now as well. This is going to be hard for Rayven to tell her that he is a demon and not only a demon but Demos. It is going to be hard for Angelica to hear this and accept it. When it comes to this time to let it out it is going to be a heart breaking chapters. I hope Angelica doesn't try to do anything crazy when Rayven tells her, like run away and something bad happens. Like the shades catching her and torture her.

I am crying With Angelica!!!Wth Rayven!?!?

Oh my Rayven I think you could havetold her in a less dramatic and scary way. Yes you did those things a lifetime away.

this is just painful to read.. 😟 Imagine how difficult it is for Rayven to confess his sins and how painful it is to see Angel's reaction. And the same goes for her.. 💔

Can he redeem himself after that confession? Poor Angelica...

Anyone else totally OK with waiting until Thursday after this chapter? I feel like I need a couple days to digest it myself... Thanks, Ray. Thanks a lot.

Well, I guess they have to clean up the mess before they start anew....

Aww Angel you needed to hear that from Rayven. 🥺 Though I wish he wouldn't yell at her and be so cold.🙄 Now I'm just imagining how Angel would react to him being Demos and a demon. I hope Angel and Rayven talk it out so that they both can help each other. Thanks for the chapter Jazzy!

fantasizing about a surprise chapter today. anyone else?

I can’t Take It!!! For the love of god! Release More chapters please 😭😭