Comments of chapter undefined of Heart of Darkness

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can't wait to see Rayven's reaction to the little poems beside his own. Now the story really begins

😭 Rayven bearing his soul in poems, I am surprised that he wrote like that UK n there and willingly gave it away 🤔 I do wonder if subconsciously he knew she would see them or did he forget he wrote in it? Hopefully he takes the book back and sees what she wrote, it might cause more red spots on his heart to appear 😁❤ I how I am falling more for Rayven with each chapter. I cant wait to see what happens next.

It seems William kept Rayven’s secret from Angelica. A man of his word…even if he isn’t a man yet. 💕

It's good that Angel has her feelings sorted about Slender, I just hope she doesn't face any more pressures. Rayven may feel repulsed at her poem in his book at first, but just as he is drawn to anything concerning her, this one won't be an exception. Promise.

It's so painful to learn how Ray is suffering to be alive.. you have strong sense of narrating the story which is fiction yet makes me feel its real... Curious to know Ray's reaction about the poem...❤❤❤[img=update]

poor rayven, such pain. such a sad and sweet chapter..glad angelica sees another side of him now to understand him better. now she can help him more and maybe start trusting him to tell her own secret she doesnt understand yet about her dreams. william really is wise beyond his years,so smart,sweet and intuitive. cant wait to read more to see how rayven handles his secret. now to figure out which lord is which&wht sin they each did.lol.

this was heartwarming. i really want to read all the poems what to do

He needs to learn to value himself and all he could offer. He is so broken right now. 🥺

Writing Poems back is clever! Hope he takes the book back!

Im glad she got isnt going to be with the king. Im truly enjoying how Rayven and Angelica are unrolling

Aww Rayven writing poems❤️and she wrote some back to him🤗

Anyone else showing 33 chapters but only 32 available when open the book? Privilege states Author still stockpiling and won allow to open.... ps. trying to be patient, but knowing there is more out there I just can't get to is HARD.... ahhhh

One poem to another will probably lead to a poem exchange-many ones at that🤭💕Lord Rayven might try denying reading them, but the poem (and more?) will change his perspective of her and life as a whole. I think Angelica's poem is hopeful and encouraging and it stirs up Rayven's dead heart. I was just wondering if Will and Angelica can read each other's thoughts or they try not to use it with each other. (and just study each other only?🤔) And in this chapter, we see how Will fully trusts Rayven, no hesitation at all. I guess Will felt his genuineness all along despite what you see in the outside (I could be wrong)

Hopefully he will read her poems ... although he's probably still so deep in self loathing he'll pretend to not see them.

Sigh... this was a lovely chapter. So bold of Angelica to basically weite directly to him. Can’t wait to see his reaction. Will probably be typical Rayven but thois still seems like a game changer.

Ahh….so sweet! Loved this chapter! It brought tears to my eyes! Thank you for the update it literally made my day! Im loving Rayven so much!

If he writes poetry… there is deep untapped beauty within him looking for avenues of expression… perhaps Ang is one such avenue! He wanted her to read his poems, know his depths, know what is truly at his core deep as it may be… Rayv is calling out to her

I thiught from the beginni g that Angelica and Rayven were destined. I iust want to know what it means for Skender! Bravo Jasmine! Again, I marvel at your works!

Oh i am loving this story! I can’t wait for the next chapter !