Awespec
Nice
These felt like two episodes of Naruto flashbacks...
You could have used one chapter to explain this.
you could say he shuts off his emotions so much that this is the dam of his emotions flooding into him shutting him down
uh those cliff...
Definitely not our normal cliff hanger more like a small bump is this the beginning of the end of a good story. Starting to get slower and had to struggle through whatever that last chapter was.
The irony being in a another novel James is the tragic protagonist who fails to save his friends from the friendly villian.
Thanks for the chapter:)) Glad he finally properly looked at these things. Looking forward to both their development.
He's having a straight panic attack at facing the truth.