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Comments of chapter undefined of Dimensional Descent

Wave37
Wave37Lv14Wave37

Yeah, this is getting waAaay to repetitive. i get that for a story to progress it needs conflict -> resolution. this though is just dragging it. Using the same plot lines to force development seems like the easy way out. i love the concept of the story, but a sprinkle of some other plot points would improvs the story immensely.

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StanLJP
StanLJPLv15StanLJP

I mean, Leonel was already hostile towards the one peak, but now this is just putting him in opposition against the entire organization. Is this bound to happen in every organization he steps foot into? 🤦‍♂️💆‍♂️

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Brown_
Brown_Lv13Brown_

Smh i should’ve kept stacking.

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BusBussy48
BusBussy48Lv13BusBussy48

i just dont get it, the leaders of hero peak should know who the morales are. sael does, it just doesnt make sense to antagonize him

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EdwardTheKid
EdwardTheKidLv14EdwardTheKid

at this point Leonel just needs to take everyone outta the snow globes and make his own faction........ just saying

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Gary_Israel
Gary_IsraelLv14Gary_Israel

Wow. He CLEARLY wants to eat a regret buffet. I didn't even know they made those but apparently he likes his regret in varying forms and flavors...

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tmanti
tmantiLv15tmanti

awe you can't keep getting away with this

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RolaySaltT20
RolaySaltT20Lv15RolaySaltT20

I want more

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Lethus
LethusLv15Lethus

If you haven‘t decided on Leonel‘s response yet: „First, I am a Force Crafter. Just because you can only wear Tier 7 doesn‘t mean I can‘t craft something better with my own two Hands.“ „Second, I was asked why I don‘t care about VHM plight. I guess this is it … I arrove I get … [listing] …“ „Third, you don‘t care about all that. You just want to be the stronger one. Did you ever think a freshman defeating a white belt is worth grooming? So let‘s fight“ Haven‘t thought through if some of these „revelations“ might hit Leonel back in the future. But maybe that‘s the charm of a youth too - blood boiling and this injustice is enough.

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MeowMeow25
MeowMeow25Lv15MeowMeow25

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

LowMentalBattery
LowMentalBatteryLv15LowMentalBattery

Honestly, I am kinda getting tired of the whole every organization is bad thing. It is getting repetitive. Otherwise good novel.

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Arkxenoth
ArkxenothLv12Arkxenoth

They dared say something was wrong with his Crafts.... good luck surviving what comes.

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Merlin7
Merlin7Lv14Merlin7

I kinda hope he doesn’t even fight Hero Peak, and just tosses god tier polished glass grenades everywhere. And then we find out the 7 dead hero peak dudes blew themselves up accidentally by underestimating Leonel’s crafts.

BlazinBean36
BlazinBean36Lv15BlazinBean36

Saint_Slayer145
Saint_Slayer145Lv15Saint_Slayer145

Thanks for the chapter :))