Awespec
Yeah, this is getting waAaay to repetitive. i get that for a story to progress it needs conflict -> resolution. this though is just dragging it. Using the same plot lines to force development seems like the easy way out. i love the concept of the story, but a sprinkle of some other plot points would improvs the story immensely.
If you havenât decided on Leonelâs response yet: âFirst, I am a Force Crafter. Just because you can only wear Tier 7 doesnât mean I canât craft something better with my own two Hands.â âSecond, I was asked why I donât care about VHM plight. I guess this is it ⌠I arrove I get ⌠[listing] âŚâ âThird, you donât care about all that. You just want to be the stronger one. Did you ever think a freshman defeating a white belt is worth grooming? So letâs fightâ Havenât thought through if some of these ârevelationsâ might hit Leonel back in the future. But maybe thatâs the charm of a youth too - blood boiling and this injustice is enough.