Comments of chapter undefined of DC: Strongest Gamer

usually I'm not too harsh but this is really bad

Yeah this needs someone to either edit it or author has to use something like grammarly because this was a mess

Bro this is barley coherent, and in several spots, completely incoherent ...

man this is a downgrade from MTL

Get Grammarly and use a paraphrase website.

the story is good, but the grammar is, don't mind me saying this, but really bad.

let me know when you rework these chapters because I unfortunately cannot make sense of them almost at all what i can follow does seem like a good story it's just I cannot put up with the garbled mess

it hurts to read

chapter is good but why is grammar ...

Okay I'm out. I really can't continue... Bye

this absolutely sucks

this is a popos

This is during Arkham city i think cause batgirl is still around and not crippled

thanks for the chapter author 👍👍

Exp

Keep going please 🤩👌

thank

thanks for the chapter