ShaggyJoestar69
Author yk A start is really important for a story And the beginning of this novel is hella bad No offence but thats what i think Also if you wanted naruto powers You should’ve just asked for otsutsuki bloodline That wouldn’t have felt like a loss wish And then why did u add rinegan when he couldve got it with the sharingan Like its hella stupid No offence But if you took offence im sorry tho idrc
Wasted wishes, 1 of those wishes he should have made it so that the system had every power, ability, skill and knowledge of every anime, manga, comics & fantasy novels or incorporate that into his sytem wish then one of those wishes could have been to have like a great amount of system currency which could have allowed him to get OP when fighting those of the same or 2-3 cultivation levels above himself