Comments of chapter undefined of Chaos' Heir
Chaos' Heir
Eveofchaos
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simonaLv13simona
So Monica is just a subtitute a pleaceholder that teaches him how to love normaly. Eve you are doing Monica dirty. No woman will likes to be used like that. If you want to make a epic love storry bettwen Khan and Lizz then keep him single and focuse on the figts and the Nakh. It's not fair for any woman to be used like that no one deserse it.
EveofchaosAuthorEveofchaos
Well, I guess we have different opinions/value here. Besides, Monica has always known this side of Khan, and it's not like he hides it or something. It might appear unfair, but they are both aware of the situation and their respective feelings.
simona:To me it doesn't look like a fulfilled relationship. Someone in a fulfilled relationship should not think about his ex in such an intimate way as you describe and with such regrate. If he never left Nitis his relationship with Monica will never happened in a way in his subconcouse he is willing to give up Monica. That is not a fulfilled relationship or true love. Also all the times he is looking at his tatoo lately it doesn't look like a person who has moved on and is in a happy relationship. Don't get me wrong I love the storry and you are doing a greate job at it. That is why I am so emotionaly involved. I know that a lot of readers don't like Monika but she really loves Khan with her everyting and reading about how you exprese her love for Khan I can't happen but to think that this is trully unfair to her.
