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Comments of chapter undefined of Chaos' Heir

Greenfoot5
Greenfoot5Lv15Greenfoot5

The last 3 paragraphs are repeated

ArkZii
ArkZiiLv13ArkZii

I really dislike these build up chapters where it swaps pov's I'd rather you hit us with the big finale of what happened then revisit the events through their eyes.

N3v3rMIND
N3v3rMINDLv15N3v3rMIND

The chapter seems unfinished. The last paragraph is only "Everything", but eehh, it's still not enough for greedy readers.

Zook_51
Zook_51Lv15Zook_51

seriously, what is Georges element again?

T_Challa
T_ChallaLv14T_Challa

As much as it sucks to get pov switches. I think as a whole, its a great move. Its nice to see how others fare and it’s nice to see that everyone isn’t hopeless without khan

S3ntinel
S3ntinelLv15S3ntinel

They are the hive ?

skeleton_key
skeleton_keyLv15skeleton_key

Thank you for the chapter Eveofchaos !

orriewalls
orriewallsLv15orriewalls

Yah! Thanks for the George chapter Eve! 5/5

Babel1234
Babel1234Lv14Babel1234

It’ s cut