Comments of chapter undefined of Chaos' Heir

Im ngl this exchange between khan and Wayne is just bad in that it makes no sense. Why would khan immediately go for an exhange with wayne with little to no information about him. I get hes rushing cause oh no theres a bomb but that doesnt really matter if you die and you think Wayne whos been trained his entire would take advantage to kill or at least cripple Khan with that exchange. Unless you believe Wayne believes this is his last hoorah and wants a good fight with Khan. idk this chapter felt like its missing something

If the others are with the bomb down below, I hope that they’re actually doing things. I could see a world where Khan beats Wayne but can’t move anymore but the bomb doesn’t explode because Monica, George and Francis played their part and deactivated it. It would kind of play against their character arcs if all they could do was wait for Khan to save them

Hopefully this is the end of Wayne, but I also kind of hope this lets khan fail. Like he get super injured and nearly dies. I feel like he deserves a big loss. I mean, Monica is already going to die, and most likely George and Andrew too. Kind of can’t wait to see the failure and pain he was receive because he’s been way too fking happy and lovey dovey lately. So many red flags and chapters spent wasted on him and Monica having sx. Will be glad to be done with Monica though. Thank god.

khan can't use his arm.. but how is Wayne able to use any of his chest muscles.. khan cut from his lower rib up to his neck...... and I doubt that cut was shallow

if this story was a chess then I'd say that the pieces/pawns developed by author such as George and Monica have turned to knight and queen ready to be sacrificed for greater "purpose/thrill" that will ultimately lead to Khan's developement to a higher dimension.

I complained earlier about the price of longer chapters. Now, let me humbly take it back. I'd be willing to pay any amount of coins to avoid cliffhangers like this. 😅

Thank you for the chapter Eveofchaos !

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Thanks for the chapter Eve 5/5!