Eveofchaos
You are really getting better at this Eve. I feel like this novel allows you to express yourself in a more 'complete' way than your other work did, at least in my opinion. I think very few authors on this website are capable of writing chapters like this one (at least for a male audience). Thanks for the great work Eve.
This isnât going to end up as a harem, right? First Martha, then the alien chick, and now some 26 yr old womenâŚ. - not to mention the time frame between themđ Surely the story wonât continue with the same âtease-momentsâ with every girl, then proceed to explain the mcâs constant broken emotional status? Righttt? Ugh, itâs so frustrating to see this the mcâs mental health continually go up and down. First the situation w/ his first kill and the rebellion; he decides to leave earth to âhealâ, but gets into this massive toxic relationship which complicates his situation even more. And now we have to deal with this chick who is desperate for an underage(correct if wrong, but he is 17?) pp :( - and I also doubt he has the self-restraint to actually not let this happen. When is the self-improvement arc cominggggg?