Comments of chapter undefined of Chaos' Heir

You are really getting better at this Eve. I feel like this novel allows you to express yourself in a more 'complete' way than your other work did, at least in my opinion. I think very few authors on this website are capable of writing chapters like this one (at least for a male audience). Thanks for the great work Eve.

Ty for the chapter ☺️

Nah fam. It hasn't even been a few months yet. Not liking Delia or Khan's interactions.

This isn’t going to end up as a harem, right? First Martha, then the alien chick, and now some 26 yr old women…. - not to mention the time frame between them🙄 Surely the story won’t continue with the same ‘tease-moments’ with every girl, then proceed to explain the mc’s constant broken emotional status? Righttt? Ugh, it’s so frustrating to see this the mc’s mental health continually go up and down. First the situation w/ his first kill and the rebellion; he decides to leave earth to ”heal”, but gets into this massive toxic relationship which complicates his situation even more. And now we have to deal with this chick who is desperate for an underage(correct if wrong, but he is 17?) pp :( - and I also doubt he has the self-restraint to actually not let this happen. When is the self-improvement arc cominggggg?

Love the chapter, keep it up! :)

Thanks for the chapter Eve!

😁👍

tx

thanks for the chapter eve. hope you are doing good. I'm excited to see the spells and how quickly Khan learns them. loved the chapter eve

Good chapter