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Comments of chapter undefined of Chaos' Heir

DireKitsune
DireKitsuneLv10DireKitsune

Looking forward to him going back to Earth.

scscs
scscsLv14scscs

Having a lot of generic battles is boring. What makes battles great are the stakes and the intensity. Who likes meaningless battles ? Romance can help with that. Also, a good battle needs to have some tension build up, and it takes time.

Greenfoot5
Greenfoot5Lv15Greenfoot5

A good ending. Looking forward to what might appear in the third arc.

SwordCreator
SwordCreatorLv15SwordCreator

I really hope Khan and liiza get back together shes my favourite love interest so far

scscs
scscsLv14scscs

I really enjoyed this volume Eve, you did some great work, hopefully the next one will be even better 😉. It would be interesting if you were to introduce other female characters later in the story, trying to get close to Khan (not wanting any harem here). Are we about to see Martha again ? Anyway, do you plan to write some chapters to keep us updated about what is going to happen on Nitis ? Maybe some chapters with Doku's pov or Illman'pov would be interesting.

Silent_But_Dudley
Silent_But_DudleyLv14Silent_But_Dudley

I think the romance having pauses is completely fine.

MAN2O7F7G3O5D3
MAN2O7F7G3O5D3Lv15MAN2O7F7G3O5D3

Definitely the best romance I’ve ever read and I really hope it will continue and she won’t become a Another Nina.

IceNSnow
IceNSnowLv15IceNSnow

Unpopular opinion: Kinda glad Khan’s getting some space. I don’t hate romance but when its taking up 2/3’ds of a story based around space exploration, it starts to become frustrating.

Vulmar
VulmarLv15Vulmar

Cheers to a good volume and another to the next!

Silent_But_Dudley
Silent_But_DudleyLv14Silent_But_Dudley

Pretty excited to see the Reaction the army has to his actions on Nitis, and also him becoming a first level already.

BlackBear
BlackBearLv15BlackBear

That’s so saaad! Thanks Eve for your hard work and vol2. It was amazing!

MAN2O7F7G3O5D3
MAN2O7F7G3O5D3Lv15MAN2O7F7G3O5D3

I don’t really know how to feel besides really empty

Cheese_curdles
Cheese_curdlesLv4Cheese_curdles

Pls author don't make the separation 500 chapters like someone suggested !!!!!

Doap_Soap_48
Doap_Soap_48Lv14Doap_Soap_48

I didn't expect to cry here. You conveyed emotion perfectly here. Drama is good in a story like this. Romance is great too. I appreciate every aspect of the story and trust wherever you take it. You've earned that much by now Eve.

Mordimero
MordimeroLv13Mordimero

Great execution! I think they will see each other in the tournanent arc :)

Joshua_Swofford
Joshua_SwoffordLv15Joshua_Swofford

and now she wakes up

Rivel_Emerald
Rivel_EmeraldLv15Rivel_Emerald

I loved the arc!

MAN2O7F7G3O5D3
MAN2O7F7G3O5D3Lv15MAN2O7F7G3O5D3

I also feel like you balance the battle and romance very well and hope to see it continue in future. Sorry for bad English

EmrysIsWarlock
EmrysIsWarlockLv15EmrysIsWarlock

All the feels 😭

Smiley56
Smiley56Lv14Smiley56

Everything about this story and your writing is perfect…. i only wish it didnt hurt so muchhhhhhhhhhh

Zili_Shufeng
Zili_ShufengLv13Zili_Shufeng

The reason I like to read is to find books that can make me feel this much, this volume was perfect in my opinion, a few characters I liked didn't make it, mainly Yeza, I feel Liiza may have lost too much between her mom,her aduns, and some friends, the only people close to her are her friends that survived now, maybe she can reconnect with her father. I do hope that George and Havaa can make it, George deserves to be happy, and Havaa is a good match.