Comments of chapter undefined of Chaos' Heir

Pain. Suffering even. Agony if you feel so inclined.

Eve is doing a great work picturing all the emotions heavily in this novel, I love it. From Khan determination, love and the way he found himself closer to every alien species than human, this is going to be amazing later. I can't wait for the future of his relationship with Liiza in specific, will she comes when he has to leave, will Khan stay semi permanent on the planet now or will she die during daylight and inflict a new round of more torment to our MC ? Imagine for example if her emotions make her mana unstable like a young one and she mutate then Khan has to take her down himself, I can't wait !

i love liiza, just love her.

I know you try to push to the action but I definitely like seeing the emotional development with Khan it's one of the things I like best about this story. in botds we've already seen Noah reach pretty much emotional maturity and go through alot of mental struggles. your character building is honestly one of my favorite things about your stories and this current arc only reinforces that particular opinion.

Action is fine but there need to be emotion in the novel as well.

Im not crying like a baby you are

cheers for the cool but sad last few chapters

Thanks for the emotional chapters and cliffhanger Eve! 5/5, I can’t wait to read more

Thanks for the chapter Eve. You are not allowed to have Liiza killed anymore btw. It's banned!! She can just join him to search for the Nak :)

This novel is such a breath of fresh air in this site. thanks for the chapter~

Please let this couple last😢

What a beautiful scene😭

See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza

I have a feeling that the government caused this incident.......only one spot was effected....

😁👍

I can't help but feel something is going to go horribly wrong.

Thia story is amazing! You are an incredible writer and the emotions that flow through your words reach the audiance. Their feelings and emotions on top of his story alone make you shiver.

this unnecessary and extensively drawn out emotional drama is a complete turn off, and a complete change of direction for this book. if this keeps up, I'll probably drop this book from my reading list.