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Comments of chapter undefined of Chaos' Heir

Greenfoot5
Greenfoot5Lv15Greenfoot5

I don't think Martha's dead. Having her die in front of Khan would be more devastating (and so better character development). I think she'll come back injured, and then possibly die due to her injuries.

AeternusCaligo
AeternusCaligoLv3AeternusCaligo

i really REALLY HOPE SHE DIE novel will become much better without her if she remains alive I would drop this novel for sure

Krisnan
KrisnanLv15Krisnan

How could you leave us on such a brutal cliff.

Sin_Of_Gluttony
Sin_Of_GluttonyLv13Sin_Of_Gluttony

I don't want to look like the edgy kid, but if she was dead it would be nice Don't misunderstand me, it would be horrible for Khan, but in a way this novel would differentiate itself from the literal sea of 2 cents romance novels where MC meets a girl at the start of his journey and they obviously end up together

Memento_mori
Memento_moriLv15Memento_mori

She’s either dead, has brain damage, or is crippled id bet money on it

BearReadsYou
BearReadsYouLv6BearReadsYou

It isn't just wife or fridged, they could end up friends or possibly even have a nasty breakup and be bitter toward each other. I don't get why everyone is trying to kill Martha off. I personally like her character so far. That'd just be the last straw to turn him ruthless, and this novel into the typical YY, only one I can depend on is me, type of novel I can't stand. BOTDS narrowly walked that line for me, but I appreciated it. I really hope it doesn't go that way.

Linn_Heimer_J
Linn_Heimer_JLv2Linn_Heimer_J

Thanky for the chaps!

psyqon
psyqonLv14psyqon

ugggh i hate you right now. but can't wait for more

JPNovelFan
JPNovelFanLv15JPNovelFan

Hopefully the additional chapters come soon. I want to see what happened to Martha. I expect death or severaly maimed at this point.

MichaelLouisXXI
MichaelLouisXXILv13MichaelLouisXXI

Cool Now then, I hope Martha lived tho if she died, this us the perfect time

Daoist0MGneA
Daoist0MGneALv15Daoist0MGneA

They were unlocked for me just now. No premium showing currently

Tarry_Knowles
Tarry_KnowlesLv15Tarry_Knowles

the novel has been great so far and I will definitely be getting the premium

Shard
ShardLv15Shard

First

Lisa_Ammon
Lisa_AmmonLv15Lisa_Ammon

Martha better not be dead eve

vkg313
vkg313Lv6vkg313

Who was Martha again?

Mr_Shang
Mr_ShangLv13Mr_Shang

Thanks for the chapter!

BELIZEAN_KOOLI
BELIZEAN_KOOLILv3BELIZEAN_KOOLI

exp

wrightyboy
wrightyboyLv3wrightyboy

good character development and are you going to continue for a long time?

Peter_Kirk
Peter_KirkLv15Peter_Kirk

Hey Eveofchaos - I am not sure if others are having this problem, but I want to bring it to your attention. Every time I read new chapters that you publish, and then exit the novel, the next time that I reopen the novel, it doesn't ooen to where I left off, but rather to 1 or 2 to chapters earlier. Which doesn't matter for free chapters, but causes a problem now that you have gone premium. As an example, I had already read through chapter 76. But this morning when I logged on, both chapter 75 and 76 were locked, and I had to pay to unlock them.

LeoStriker23
LeoStriker23Lv15LeoStriker23

BRUH! WHY YOU DO THIS?!

JPNovelFan
JPNovelFanLv15JPNovelFan

Publish the chapters!!! Lets goooooo! Hypehypehypehype