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Honestly is kind of disappointing to see so many errors, misspelled words, half finished sentences and everything...
i'll trust you
I honestly don't understand the point of writing these dreams if he literally doesn't remember anything once he wakes up. I mean, they don't add anything to the story.
*if anything
*tried
*overload
*wrapped
I really like his awkwardness, it shows how he's not perfect in everything
Then why did you even ask how many strands she wanted ?
She didn't say that 😐
I really don't understand why you are writing like this. Just say three....
Very cool, except for the name
I'll never get over the suspicion that you're actually just translating a chinese novel 😂
I think this "it's all my fault because I'm too weak" trope among his women is starting to get old..
We've seen this cliche so many times, and yet, if properly executed, it's still enjoyable Good job author.
WHAT
Sure 🤷🏻
Look man, let's stop here We're both clearly not understanding each other and this discussion has been all but useless. I'm not even going to bother listing the amount of times it has been stated by the author that Lith is no genius and is moderately talented at best.