Comments of chapter undefined of Chaos' Heir

I feel the pace is good. It's important to have a good foundation.

I think it is alright as it makes sense for the plot line of a boy from the slums overcoming odds slowly throught intense training

The pace so far seems good, plenty of details and explanations to build around. Looking forward to fights and action but no need to sacrifice any storyline for them :) Thank you for the chapters

the pace is fine he has to grow and its a grind.

The pacing is fine, skipping a week or a month here and there isn't jarring. It also makes sense plot wise since everyone in the camp is focused on training, getting to 20%, etc. Honestly my biggest gripe is only getting two chapters a day since I'm already hella invested. Really loving the concept and overall book so far.

I think the pace is good. Some world-building is necessary. If you’re wanting to mix up things a bit, send the bullies back in just to show how much Khan has grown or something. The flow wouldnt get messed up like that.

Amazing story eve keep up the grewt work, fights are always fun and exciting to delve imto but getting the back ground and knowledge first is nice, maybe even a teaser fight like BTDS wIth soldier fights and Noah’s nature but as a khan version

Thanks for the chapters and cliffhanger Eve! 5/5, I have been enjoying the pase of the story, but I have been wondering what will the “world is in peril” conflict will be and when might it hit

Hi Eve, I think it's a good pace, the school/learning part is a good way to develop the character, and for us readers to understand the world. I am super curious about the magic part, how it works, and how the chaos element properly used will compare to other elements. congrats on this new story.

Thanks for the chapter!

I almost think you are flying through the details already... but the pace your going at is acceptable...

pace is good

Thank you for the Chapter!

great chapter Eve you're doing great just the way it is keep her nice and steady

take your time to develop your world

Your doing an excellent job with your writtings. No need to fill rushed its like a build up to what we all know is comming Then when it finnialy gets here its gonna be a bang. Sadly ive read other books on here and one author in peticular over dose it with details to fill his word quantity.

Im enjoying the pave, dont rush

I'm really enjoying the pace as it is. write the way you want! Have fun with it

I like the details you put in your stories. Keep up the good work.