darn ittttt WE DEMAN FEAR BE INSTILLED INTO THE WEAK!!! lol

faswite isnt that the stuff they make synthetic mana out of.

Your doing an excellent job with your writtings. No need to fill rushed its like a build up to what we all know is comming Then when it finnialy gets here its gonna be a bang. Sadly ive read other books on here and one author in peticular over dose it with details to fill his word quantity.

The storys very good so far eve. The world building you describe is very nice as ussal. Hint of just plain advice I really dont think you need it tho. Just always remmember never go to far in depth then it starts to fill like an instructional booklet.

heh guessing the term QUEEN BEE is gonna come true possibly.

THE NINTH RANK!!! CURIOUS CURIOUS I SAY!!!!

THE MAD DOCTOR IS IN! nurse night scalpel! assistant snore foucus a beam here here anddd here. PLANT GET BACK IN THERE I DIDNT SAY YOU COULD COME OUT!!! demonic sword cut from here to here. no wait he.....oh to late.

I TOLD YOU!!

lots of challenges there if you know what i mean.

Nah she probaly one of the beast form type hybrids. So she either has an item to help hide her in humanoid form or she has a rare ability to transform at will.

oh now where making nano bombs okay XD

fish sticks hecwas going to say fish sticks i just know it!!!

I do possibly see a future fight or high tensions between Divine Demon and King Elbas if they where to meet. The reason for this Elbas did kill Chasing Demon so there is a grudge to be made but also a CHALLENGE!

I better not get Diablo vibes from this black shard.

MAN the aspects that you make for his darkworld are AMAZING. Keep it up!!!

its true and most others have horrible grammar. With not going back to fix most of their spell checks.

Hmmm.. Im really interested in what type of inheritance you have in mind for him to find. Possibly!?!? Something to help him with Wills or something similer to the demonic form. With how its a charatheristic of a parasitic spell. Oh well it will be fun to see how this plays out. Still loving this story keep up the good work yes some rest I recommend an ontiment that targets nerves for that neck with a mix of lidocaine icy/hot.

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

Love it love it the way this story plays out in ways that leaves you wanting more and more after each chapter. Nevertheless the ways the author writes reminds me in ways of how I think when character designing. But alas cudos to you.