Comments of chapter undefined of The Dream Saga

An excellent start to the novel:) Keep it up Pls like this comment:)

I had fun reading the first chapter, the only suggestion I could give is minding the capitalization, but overall it’s a great start, kudos.[img=recommend]

Not a bad story but there are issues. the narrative could use some work. some sentences did not flow well and perhaps you could look into grammar. I felt lost at times and boy oh boy dialogue does not work that way. I know I'm being a bit too frank but maybe you should read some published works as an author rather than a reader.

Great start of the chapters! I suggest keeping the capitalization correctly the reason is to make your novel looks pleasant to read, that's a minor issue since we know our brain works fast than our hands. But overall. Great start to the novel! I like it. I would definitely add this to my library, I'll subscribe to this. It hooks me up.

Hey,I have featured your work in comments of my new ch. Do hope you'll get more readers.

Lol in first ch protagonist in a nasty pond

nice story good work

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woo...this story is so refreshing and unique..sjjsjkks..first I thought it was a normal fantasy with parallel world or heroic adventure but as I go to next chapter everytime..it make me to read more..😭..underrated gem..

Hi I reread the chapter 1, I’m kinda confuse, did the MC saw a puppies or a puppy ( pertaining to all alone)?

I would like to say I got actually goosebumps with this chapter... Keep it up writer👍