PancakesWitch
The corrupted/possessed/parasited mind cliche is so insanely frustrating. Nobody likes reading a character that has no agency and that cliche takes it away.
I wrote that comment when I read that chapter. I have since caught up on the story and you basically resolved the issue as of where the story is right now and it didn't take hundreds of chapters like it does in other novels. The trope is frustrating because it makes the one thing a character almost always has control over, their mind/thoughts, and strips that from them. This can be useful when used as a plot device to further a specific goal but when it is a persistent facet of a story it can become extremely annoying. I am quite happy with how you dealt with it and that as mentioned you didn't take hundreds of chapters to do so.
PancakesWitch:Frustrating? i find it pretty good, specially by how i handle it, also the girl is the literal female lead so she is very important!
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