Comments of chapter undefined of Harry Potter: The New Dark Lord
Harry Potter: The New Dark Lord
GNaNA
Chapter comments5
you know some authors write way too much smut at times and you know they don't realize it because subconsciously they are craving sex, well seems we have the same except the author craves violence and mutilation, the start has been very little of plot or story its just been about violence, torture and child rape.... I think we have a very sick puppy on our hands. the first part has been drawn out waaaaaaaaay to long and so much useless violence and let's not forget about adding the longbottom twist, which is no reason for, he looks the same and once she sees him and hears his name she would know who it is..... so cliche, its like he is wanting to make a Sherlock Holmes and Moriarty conflict which sounds cool but they both already will know who each other is so there will be no great mystery. anyway....
Who told you that they will know each other??? You will understand later. Both of them, don't look like their past self. And it would take ages before they found out about each other. You might think the start is too long, but you will find the reason soon. As for the violence, I stated it at the start and made it like this after reading about Tom Riddle's childhood but I made it much worse.
