Comments of chapter undefined of KnB FanFic: Rise(On Hiatus)

Now Sora has developed the zone fully, that is great for the team, I tell You Tanaka is a very good rival motivating the opponent and giving comfort. Just fantastic

honestly the book is becoming boring... you are rationalizing and mystifying both abilities and zone at the same time, hmm i dont kow how to say it but the book feels rushed at the same time the MC's backstory is a mess plus did he not have a system? he is in his first year of junior high and he is already in the zone? he is no where near the main storyline and somehow he is playing on a level above what the GOM's reached the main plotline because their abilities manifested slowly and was fully known but not fully useable due to physical limits and the annoying part is sora how did he get into the zone seriously? its like you are trying to build your own GOM's in addition to the OGs. simply put this story feels like you write on the fly. To me its not well thought out.

Once again excellent job and i like how you are making him Motivate the other team to get better that is real sportsmanship excellent job now for the ones who are giving there bad opinions ignore them they dont have to read it but they still do which makes no sense to me at all. Dont ruin ot for everyone who is enjoying reading this fanfic

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thanks for the chapter please keep up the good work!!

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