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Comments of chapter undefined of Ozania Odyssey

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Dystopian_Novels
Dystopian_NovelsLv1Dystopian_Novels

The world building and plot is really interesting. I'm really enjoying the unique setting. Still I feel like you're telling the reader too much instead of showing us naturally. There are a lot of info dumps that seem unnatural or irrelevant to the plot. Other than that it's a pretty solid beginning and I'm excited to read more.

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Daniel_Lane_4048
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Thanks for the review👍. And while the stuff I'm introducing might see random it's there for future story arcs and I'm glad you like the story🙏.