interesting start. lots of action, and the enemies are clearly drawn out. looks to be a good read. is the MC in line to be the king or a family head before his birthday?
i remember watching The Jumper whenever he focused on the location or scenery he teleport. oh I wud love to have that komodo skin so i can make my own non-conspicous thin but spacious storage. potek hard to english. hehe
this is literally how all empires fall by suppressing talents better than the ruling class. it will always fail there always be ones who fall through the cracks. it's just stupid to suppress because you aren't good enough