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Enjoyable, A few confusing points, He not stupid, so why is he doing so much in the no intelligence department. Has money but living in a landfill for over a month, can buy everything he needs but doesn't with $100,000's in place. I hope MC uses some intelligence soon.
I have found this one entertaining. Big info in the first 3 ch. But after that the base is set and the readers involvement is easy, quickly takes you in. Great start. Flow is good. The plot has many thoughtful turns, and options. I look forward to the Authors choices.šš[img=recommend]
This is a great story line. It has lots of back ground, the characters are fleshed out. It has its ups and downs. I'm really looking forward to where the Author is taking the MC, and how his journey goes. there is a lot in the time line, and the small but interesting differences of what the MC knows and where in the timeline it's at that point. I hope the Author gets their imagination in full throttle, so we can see how these interesting worlds mash together, how the MC mental handled things. I'm also happy the MC is not so op that the story is boring you can just skip chapters with little issue, it's good MC has to fight for strength, in the different areas of life. š
pretty good storyline. A lot of back and forth on the two ends of help everyone and help on one. a lot of drama from different points as well. so far a fairly good read. not big on MC stupidity of flying to Italy, instead of taking over clearing out FL. the place has 200,000 pol but they have came across 30 people. a lot of oddities left hanging, but at least the story moves forward, not bogging down. good job