Comments of chapter undefined of Crossdressing To Survive An Apocalypse [BL]

ummmm...... IDK why but it seems kinda forced to me. Like, there are many fan-service moments. I get that it is required but these things shouldn't be the main point for their starting relationship. It seems very unnatural.... They should fall in love naturally [like, MC doesn't know that his parents think that he is smitten with Fan and even Fan thinks so. MC is kept in the dark, the MC will enter into embarrassing situations (with or without him knowing) and then he won't know when their relationship has gone too ahead. And then he would've gone too far in the relationship so he will accept him (this is unnatural since MC unknowingly entered into a relationship)]Author I really hope you don't mind me giving out these critical reviews. It's just that I like this story and I would just like to point out some things