Comments of chapter undefined of Blood Warlock: Succubus Partner in the Apocalypse

I'm glad you took the time to explain more about the MC's personality and to show that he really has emotions. Excellent work as always XIETIAN! Loving the novel <3

Yesssssss You’ve kept him human, i know it sounds stupid but Its the crying when the phone doesnt pick up that makes the character so much more real

Character development is on point so far. I am really intrigued to read this story as it unfolds!

A realistic character, human emotions. This is getting better and better. He will grow stronger without losing or forgetting what is important. Thanks for the chapter!

This is a really good read so far, not only are all the basic aspects (extremely)good(grammar, clear lines of thought, difrentation between thought and speech, etc..) the actaul novel itself is fresh, like a breath of air on top of a mountion after being in an airtight room for hours, It has a level of realism which iS not to the extent of which of being annoying but keeps the novel within bondaries of being random, The character springs into action at first but when finally given the time to rest, he is hut by the total realiZation Of the apoclypse, the emituons are good and the writing so far is amazing, i might be a bit late but keep it up

As every comment says, this chapter has perfectly captured Bai Zemin's emotions. My eyes sting a bit as well. I hope someone among his family is alive. Excellent work, XIETIAN.

i would not be surpised if he will stay mostly to him aelf and the silver haired girl comes to talk to him first

very good to see you have hit >15000 words so you are now in the rankings. it's time to shoot for the top.

Thx

W chapter glad to see mc has internal struggles and that Lilith has empathy for him it opens a lot of possibilities

Everyday I can only wait and crave for the next Chapter. You are doing perfectly. Keep it up! :)

thanks

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good son

As promised, I wrote a review 👍 As this is a new novel worth fostering, I will nurture it with spirit stones.

gg.thx

Hmmm its good here's my stone!!

Thanks for the chapter!