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I think people are getting bothered by the clone stuff because of how you have made the clones interact with the MC. From my perspective it seems as if the clones are autonomous and have their own personalities since they always seem to clash with their creator rather than simply doing the tasks theyāre given.
it would be like the 6th day, in that just because it's you does that mean it would be nice to see your wife having a life with someone else that's not personally you? The clone at that time still has independent thought from the host or mc, so it's basically a whole different person before the refusion happens, if the clone was more of the mc controlling it himself I'd have less qualms but it's a separate entity at this point. It would be the equivalent of making that cloning wish again where that new clone is the exact same as kakarot and letting him be with bulma because they are the same down to the smallest detail, it's just weird.
The story is going well as it is going so far, about the NTR clone, I don't know if it can be called that because I think it is like the shadow clone, because they share a mind and everything, and their life is linked to the ki of the original, also that scene where the clone makes fun of him, it only looks like a joke since I don't think they have a separate conscience. as if it is his case, being a clone but having his own conscience.
I personally don't like the whole clone thing either but I'm probley not going to drop the story. I mean it's not full-blown NTR so I guess I'll just try to ignore it cause in my opinion this is probably one of the best dragon ball fanfics I've read. I still don't like it though even though what you said it still feels like NTR hope you don't go down this road cause it kind of kills the whole mood.
Use wishes but on a list.say porunga grant me everything in this list. -increase zenkai? -able to breathe in space - all methods on ki control, -all methods on magic control. -telekenises -mind reading immunity, telepathy. -the universe 100 best fighting styles suited for your body type. - awakeneing your potential. -awaken your ancient saiayan dna. -more s cell production. - regeneration factor that increase with more use and training (abit like deadpool or wolverine) -increase ki pool -increase ki regeneration. -no one is able to clone you. -soul protection from posession and corruption. - teleportation technique. -tree of might seeds. -sensu beans -precognition or battle precognition like spider sense. -increase IQ or battle IQ. -immune to diseases and poisions. -unable for anyone else other than uou tk wish away any of these wishes. -magic materialisation and knowledge of how to upgrade gravity chamber to 100000x gravity. -maybe the ability to speed up thoughts. -Wish for dna of broly to merge with you. -wish for dna of cumber to merge with you. use the wishes for more efficently. on a previous chapter I made a similar comment.
thx for the chapter and can't wait for moreššš¼šš¼ doesn't the namekian Dragon Balls have three wishes? and if so you should wish for 1. wish to have the purest ki 2. to be able to heal and recover stamina but also ki to 4 times or 10 times faster 3. I'm making your Saiyan DNA more pure but without you going to more crazy or whatever