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Comments of chapter undefined of FMAB: The Raven Alchemist.

Eltoxico69
Eltoxico69Lv4Eltoxico69

Meh, The mc is very passive, let others control it as they please, (this is not a hateful comment just Are my thoughts on the chapter, if you don't like just ignore it)

DA_MILK
DA_MILKAuthorDA_MILK

Yea... no. I said that it is a plot convenience chapter, so I have no excuse. This being trapped situation was pretty lame, I agree. As for the MC being passive? It's the military dude. The world's strongest military to be precise. So if he went against their words he would be considered a national criminal and even countries that have a good relationship with Amestris would declare him as a criminal in their countries. I don't want that. But I will try to explain the 4 weeks trapped scenario with a decent enough reason in the later Chaps.

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Re_Zeco
Re_ZecoLv4Re_Zeco

I feel sorry for Burne, but I am too happy that he will be spending time with Mira.

FastestOfAllSperm
FastestOfAllSpermLv2FastestOfAllSperm

We know what you want, author.

LaurentCross
LaurentCrossLv13LaurentCross

you’re mc is to passive and a beta so far your story is extremely boring no offense i’m just stating my opinion

DragonkingKyo
DragonkingKyoLv6DragonkingKyo

thanks for the chapter

Reisgem
ReisgemLv13Reisgem

Lung_Thang
Lung_ThangLv1Lung_Thang

Vooosh

Wellington_Lucas
Wellington_LucasLv4Wellington_Lucas

Obrigado pelo capítulo incrível Autor-San!!❤❤❤❤❤😍😍😍😍😍😍

Zeussh
ZeusshLv4Zeussh

Thanks for the chapter

Alpha_Shaker
Alpha_ShakerLv4Alpha_Shaker

Great chapter I can't wait to read more

Insert_Name
Insert_NameLv14Insert_Name

Thanks for the Chapter

PrinceSloth
PrinceSlothLv3PrinceSloth

Thanks for the chapter