Master_Livythan
you are sincere, for example with the muscles, you say buff is better than lean and you explained why, you really put your experience in the book, like a gym session you do what you can do (you don't go and suddenly lift a lot, because you know what you can do, you are not looking for a Lession or broken ligament) what I am trying to write is that your writing is good and if someone comes and tells you to write like a professional, when you are still learning then that will only result in a negative repercussion (such as a joint injury).
My sincere respects to you Author san since you described everything perfectly sincerely I am glad that you silence people who do not think well of Fic because if you want to read something you have to put yourself in the place of the Main or Secondary characters because if You don't do it as you understand why they do things themselves is the same as reading a story for reading without understanding the 😑😑😑😑