Miss_Behaviour
Oh miss B. I think that it's more about expanding on other characters. I find your book extra ordinarily interesting for the fact that other characters stories are interesting. At first Lucy and Tom were excitingly interesting, then you introduced Sonia and Brian, yo that was super interesting, now that we are greatly excited about Harry and jade, your a bit stingy with there story line. Still focusing more on Tom and Lucy. I don't think it's all bout ending the book but giving some stress free chapters of other characters then throwing in problematic Tom and Lucy.
I feel bad for Lawrence, he could not feel peace as the prank he put up ended in making many angry.he had to listen to the blaming from son, grandson,daughter in law n to be grand daughter in law at this ripe age although he didn't mean it.he held the fear for what his son would say.Lucy should not have been harsh.that reminds me my past behaviour with my near one after that person is no more.
miss B your story and the way of writing , keeping ups and downs, trying to show all the aspects of life in one single story ettttcccc is so amazing I really have no words to describe But a part of my heart feels angry towards Lucy for not understanding and forgiving Lawrence inspite of knowing his old age ,good intention and care towards them and also Tom who inturn supported Lucy neglecting his grandfather. How much pressurized Lawrence might have felt after hearing Lucy's words. Why didn't anyone consider his age ? How heartless