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Comments of chapter undefined of Elania, Arachne in a different world [GL]

Myrsha
MyrshaLv1Myrsha

Not sure what you're apologizing for. Achieving a 100% perfection is pretty much impossible. However, I didn't notice any "feel", the "feel" of this chapter being bad is only in your head, at least in my opinion. Nothing is wrong with this chapter, it's good as the other chapters. I enjoyed the little tangle with the pair of drunk elves, and the chapter name made me think of "spice and wolf" which I do love.

Myrsha
MyrshaLv1Myrsha

I'm aware. Point was, not every chapter has to be an action chapter, and spice and wolf isn't an action story, it's ok to have some slice of life chapters. ^.^ even though this one still had some action, so it's a good chapter.

Faragi:that was the title reference :p
Caiow
CaiowLv14Caiow

Nonsense... I readed this chapter in no time. The pacing and the writhing quality is very good!