Faragi
Not sure what you're apologizing for. Achieving a 100% perfection is pretty much impossible. However, I didn't notice any "feel", the "feel" of this chapter being bad is only in your head, at least in my opinion. Nothing is wrong with this chapter, it's good as the other chapters. I enjoyed the little tangle with the pair of drunk elves, and the chapter name made me think of "spice and wolf" which I do love.