Wizzez
needs a bit of work still. a lot of stuff is just happening. oh hes got a system, now his arms reattached, now the person just happens to have an ancient tablet that talks about the system, now people are showering MC with gifts. the core idea of the story is fine, newly orphaned kid, gets a system, evil nobles, family hates him. too much Deus Ex Machina, problems arise and suddenly they get solved through no effort of the MC, it just happens. no build up, no struggle, no real explanation, it just gets fixed.