Comments of chapter undefined of Transmigrated into My Hero Academia

i think the fight was done okay. personally it doesnt need a rework and is fine as is. Its not the best. It could have been done better but its not bad to the point it needs to be re-done personally. if changes needed to be made then maybe have the mc stop with his overuse of brute force. i mean he just went and created the biggest flames he can and expected it to work. Considering his power is restricted by stamina then thats pretty dumb. maybe more finesse control. since his power uses stamina then instead of creating all that fire of which like 80% would miss and fly past, and heat be released into air wasting stamina then maybe he could have tried to control it more. Prevent too much heat loss to preserve stamina, minimize the amount missing by being more precise. Alternativly he could have used his elements more. like super heating him and then cooling him down or use earth elements to bury him. There are many ways the fight could have been better but i feel how it currently is, is fine enough. Reworks are iffy as most authors lose motivation trying to go back. Its best to just move on and adapt the story in the direction people dont want after reactions from this fight. Main thing. If you do re-do the conclusion should be similar or same as I myself know I am not bothered to re-read the fight and others might as well. So change the fight if you think but the conclusion needs to stay similar so it doesnt cause confusion.

When you put it that way, he might be a little weak for the effort. Three years may not sound like much, and maybe I'm expecting too much, but I compare it to the other kids. They didn't even have a full year of training their quirks to make large leaps of progress. Though he does have several elements to work with, so the difficulty level would be higher. Still for three years he had little else to do in his freetime. With no real family or friends nor childish distractions. His school work wouldn't had been particularly difficult so even that wouldn't had taken up much of his time. Plus didn't he have government sponsored training? Which also likely included a diet routine, which is important. Maybe in the real world the small time-gap wouldn't mean much but in a world like MHA its pretty significant. Look at Deku. He was a completely inept twig boy but 10 months of working on a beach he's rippling with muscles, even if he didnt' swell up any in size. If 10 months on a beach can do that to Deku without a quirk imagine what 3 years of dedicated government sponsored training and quirk (which can even heal) would get you. He wouldn't have much in terms of real experience fighting villains but he would be in peak performance physically. Todoroki might be the best example. Pretty sure he's been training way longer than anyone else and hes pretty OP in his own right. Yet unlike our MC I doubt Todoroki really invested into it as deeply. He was probably reluctant and only did what his dad forced on him. The MC has been pretty driven to be the best he can be for three years straight. So him getting practically KO'd within what likely took less than 3 minutes of fighting is kinda disappointing.

Cover Art Time. Hold onto your britches, there's a lot of them, lol. So, I made basically two versions, but with many variants (at least for one version). As requested I went with a more urban city anime Japan backdrop. This posed a few issues I didn't quite expect. While there are indeed a lot of good backdrops that fit in this category, they didn't all really suit the model. See, with the way I added the elements floating around him the model has a limit to how "zoomed in" it can be. If, for example, the model is enlarged to focus from his mid-back and up, it would work better with more backdrops, IMO. Yet if I did this you wouldn't actually see the elements. So to keep the elements in view the "camera" view has to remain kinda far back. This created a rather odd "giant on the street" effect which was less than ideal, imo. I'm not sure I'm explaining it right, but thats the best I got. Though I guess I could had added an blurring artsy filter over the backdrop to make it more clear its meant to be a backdrop and not a scene for the character to be in. I only thought of that while writing this, so hindsight is 20x20 I guess. Anyway, I made 6 "larger" versions. They're all the same but with different backdrops. Then I made 2 with model smaller and the title moved up top instead of the bottom. Personally I'm quite satisfied with the way it turned out. Let me know if you want a change of any of them. For example I can move any of the text around to your liking or if you want to try a different backdrop with the smaller model. Just let me know and I'll try to accommodate. With that out of the way, lets begin the long string of comment posts to include all these guys. Ho boy. ElementalistCover1

I liked the fight but the fact that he underestimated the Nomu is kinda Disappointing

BTW If you do rewrite may I suggest a better title? Something that perhaps relates to the MC's quirk? MHA Elementalst, for example, or MHA Elementalist Hero. Something to make it a bit more memorable than just "Transmigrated into My Hero Academia" which is, with all respect, very generic. If you'd like I could see about tossing together a coverart for you too if you do. [img=recommend]

I mean, I like the MC right now, but if you did want to power him up, maybe for the distant future, you could give him a moment of realization or comprehension. Similar to the ones anime protagonists have when they are near death, where it all just sort of clicks. that would be kinda cool

i think he could have restrained nomu by using a dome with spikes then burning him so it doesn't move. don't you he should have more controll of his other elements besides his fire

Yes you did nerf a little bit, his quirk elemental manuplation, is so versatile and powerful, even if the mc is not a genius, he could possibly create a good plan to defeat anyone, except maybe all for one and all might.

I think it ok , but the all Element is not really efective like fire.

Its been awhile so i might forget some things but I honestly don’t have a problem with the fight senes but there’s always room for improvement , I found it pretty refreshing seeing mc getting really hurt and not just destroying nomu in five hits. I don’t think the mc was nerfed as todori kid describe his flame as almost the same as his dad and he almost defeated nomu, who was made to defeat the strongest hero. If you mean nerf by him not using other elements or combinations then he was kinda nerfed but it makes sense on why he used fire as it does the most damage. In my opinion you should just keep going, redoing things sucks.

i think instead of using fire you can just use air element to make nomu unable to breath right ??? it would work right ????

Yo creo que con el fuego hubiera podido vencer a el nomu sin salir tan lastimado

add more elemental combinations while enhancing his control over his quirk so his improvement won't be so drastic similar to bakugou and the other in the beginning of the anime till the training camp their improvement consisted mostly of experience regarding to how to control their quirks better😀👍