Comments of chapter undefined of Shoujo Phantasia
Shoujo Phantasia
ASpyFromMars
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Thanks Author-san. It's just that in other novels, appearance is almost immediately and in detail mentioned, and thanks to this it is much easier to imagine the main character, his actions, facial expressions, etc.
ASpyFromMars:i did mention somewhere in the story that he had black hair and eyes and a little above average height. if i had a picture of him, i guess he’ll look more like this.image
do you guys want some slice-of-life chapters in the future with Batu and Louise. BTW, next summoning hopefully soon, still deciding who i should pick
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ASpyFromMars
author I imagine that for defeating him he will only receive good rewards such as (the weapon and armor he used, gold, some skills he used, things he from his lord). - It would be fair since he risked his life, it would be fair that he get big rewards, and as they say, it would be good a break so that the protagonist and the invocation better know each other, not to mention it would be interesting to see what happens in Luise's world parents, Queen Henrieta and her sisters must have found out about her disappearance, and among other things). - I like how you advance and the theme (I have read others with similar, where they invoke, but they did not know how to take advantage of how you do it, they only made their invocations do everything and they spent it depending a lot). - keep more good chapters.
The idea is great, but the atmosphere seems... Wrong? Serious, I feel like I'm reading Konosuba again... I think it needs more detail in the deadly and tense scenes. In addition to a little more difficulty in the characters accepting the events, because Louise (a NOBLE) accepted too easily being a servant and being a void mage (basically divine magic in her world and that could be blasphemy punishable by death in her kingdom) [GT]
