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Comments of chapter undefined of Naruto : The Wind Calamity

RayD_7235
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why he didn't kill children's like in canon ?

BCqpLAN_CrOw
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it's been a great journey but i think ill stop reading here, I thought he will atleast try to save his teammate and atleast show some character development and show some emotion that he cares for others not just himself, but if he will stay like this and only there for power I think I will stop here cause if even the death of his teammate does not affect him and not even care for her I don't think he will change in the future. so it been a great read but good bye I'll remove this from my library and forget about this story and the disappointment I felt reading this latest two chapters.

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DemiGod_2972
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Great Chapter, author-senpai. I wonder how these young kids will impact the story and more importantly, Sasuke.

DaoistYDA2hX
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So many thoughts regarding the last couple chapters... While I respect the author's decision, (which was apparently voted for in Patreon unfortunately) I had hoped it would've gone the other way. I'm personally dropping if even after this event Fujin shows no regrets and proves to be truly emotionless. Even if he does regret his cowardice, my investment in his character will drop because it will mostly be disgusting to read about him interacting with Hoka and his Sensei genuinely while knowing he had the chance to save Mieko. I'm also not happy with the fact that the children survived as alternating from the canon here would only have been worth it if the MC had acted to change it. These kids being spared randomly just messes things up. I do hope Fujin gets a rat summon as that is what he is.

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senikla
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I hope Fujin realizes his mistake. would be good character development.

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SlowWittedSong
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Rip...Miyoko...((((((((😭

Aeon_Storm
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I was disappointed that he didn’t save his teammate.

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Nymos_Error404
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So if uchiha kids are not in Academy they are same age as hanabi hyuga or younger that's means they won't be in 4th great ninja war.

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showdawn
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now that danzo's plan about these extra children has failed, I wonder how he will act. Since you have made him even more ambitious in this fanfic, I hope it is not just to be a plot device to change the massacre.

Sami_Alfoheday
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I don't think any of the children have the talent to awake the Sharingan In this way, the continuity of the clan is ensured because their children may awaken the Sharingan and they can't not affect the story

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Dead_Pharaoh01
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Somehow the author has managed to make DANZO of all people seem more human than the MC. Jesus Christ man

Shoyou_Hinata_1209
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All these people complaining about how he didn't try to save his teammate blah blah, are you forgetting this matter is a secret even among Konoha top people so much so that kakashi who's supposed to be next hokage candidate doesn't know about it. How was he supposed to explain that he found out about it? And he's an orphan with zero backing he'd be killed just like uchiha and anyone would do same in such situation in fact that's how a realistic person would act in such situation. Also the eyes he took are from akikikho so it's not like he's particularly close to him or anything

Tahiryo
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Author not liking comments of criticism is crazy petty.

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Gordon_2208
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Goooood

NvR_MnD
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dude...i dont know if ill show much interest in reading this one again... it was a good run bro... i was hoping he use his badgers to atleast save meiko... or u know put some kind of seal into her when she is about to die... this is messed up men, human emotion is a bond to people and those who dont have are... haaa just really disappointed

Rak
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author san, did fujin take any wind scrolls or resources ? he had access and planned for a month to steal. please tell me he at least got those wind crystals which only hiruzen can get. uchiha should have some at least of fire which he can exchange for wind easily since few people have wind

DuchessKolslaw
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Meiko was more i.portant than saving a few extra kids who are all going to become Edgelprd Sasukes. I've seen naruto fictions where they let the story be filled with Chinese cultivation nonsense and this was a million times worse. 1stars my guy. 1stars.

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jasss22
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Thanks for the chapter

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EvilPenguin_666
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Jimmy_d
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Thanks for the chapter