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Comments of chapter undefined of The India that could be

RCV
RCVLv4RCV

Like the story and reads well but would could benefit from an editor to make the story/sentences flow better.

Cain_101
Cain_101Lv4Cain_101

this chapter was good but there was one small problem those who are not Indian will not know what is Sarkar or chote Sarkar only Indian will know its meaning if you are only expecting Indian audience then its not a problem but if your also expecting international outreach then you have to keep in mind to explain there meaning or it will break the flow of story for them; other than that everything is excellent keep up the good work [img=recommend]

Jawsome_Shark_27
Jawsome_Shark_27Lv13Jawsome_Shark_27

Great begin, but can someone please tell me who … is .😜

God_of_penguins
God_of_penguinsLv4God_of_penguins

Thanks for the chapter

Bro_is_bored
Bro_is_boredLv4Bro_is_bored

good start author i going to follow this book.✌️

Wobyanga
WobyangaLv13Wobyanga

Absolutely fascinating, loving the generational story how it flows and how the wealth dwindled with time.