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Comments of chapter undefined of The Hentai Protagonist System [New Version]

AdeptusKustotes
AdeptusKustotesLv3AdeptusKustotes

Man just focus on mc, why did u even add gods? Focus on story and characters

Zakirael
ZakiraelAuthorZakirael

preparing for multiverse harem😉😉

dippmann
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Ima be honest with you I don’t know why you rewrote this cause the first version was a whole lot better atleast he was actually doing things This version just feels unbelievably stretched out and nothing but filler

JoaoV4SM
JoaoV4SMLv4JoaoV4SM

in these last 3 chapters I only needed 1 this one specifically. he didn't need to go meet the gods, it was just for a note saying that the system was reformulated because it was broken and in the conversation of this chapter explain why it was wrong

Uncertainty
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Thanks for the chapter

Elbie_Limit
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Thanks for the chapter 👍

Elbie_Limit
Elbie_LimitLv14Elbie_Limit

Thanks for the chapter 👍

PleasureDemonDrak
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can you hurry and get to the point because i'm starting to not like this book anymore and please hurry up and tell us what the gods are doing this for because i'm really hoping he kills them like just tell him from what i can get from him is he will understand if it doesn't mess with his life there

Lord_Nyx
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please keep the harem to the one universe

Raider9517
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Thanks for the chapter 👍🤩👍🤩👍🤩

shockfoxx
shockfoxxLv14shockfoxx

Not bad, interesting idea. Might want to do a little editing.

Dark19
Dark19Lv11Dark19

Siento que hay mucho relleno

Ai_Evangeline
Ai_EvangelineLv4Ai_Evangeline

there will be war then...that's interesting

Armitano
ArmitanoLv4Armitano

Thanks for the chapter

Lucifer_777
Lucifer_777Lv3Lucifer_777

Хорошая глава

Arsene_Holmes
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Thanks for the chapter

Saint_Slayer145
Saint_Slayer145Lv15Saint_Slayer145

Thanks for the chapter :)

KKH
KKHLv4KKH

thanks for the chapter

jeanpierregerardo
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good chapter