Ima be honest with you I don’t know why you rewrote this cause the first version was a whole lot better atleast he was actually doing things This version just feels unbelievably stretched out and nothing but filler
in these last 3 chapters I only needed 1 this one specifically.
he didn't need to go meet the gods, it was just for a note saying that the system was reformulated because it was broken and in the conversation of this chapter explain why it was wrong
can you hurry and get to the point because i'm starting to not like this book anymore and please hurry up and tell us what the gods are doing this for because i'm really hoping he kills them like just tell him from what i can get from him is he will understand if it doesn't mess with his life there